Im posting my roughs as I go to make sure I'm on the right track. So far I have 5 done. Anybody please comments, feel free to tell me if I am heading in the right direction or not. Thanks.
The 2nd one works well, since the spacing between the words are equally balanced. The kerning/tracking between the letters and words are balanced as well. Also, I think that you chose the right typefaces for this part of the project. You just need to watch the spaces in between the letters and words; some are just a bit too close to each other. The first image has potential. The third and fourth are so overbearing that they can be confusing. However, the concepts are there. ;D
GOOD JOB! The second one is good as Nil said. I think it is the best. I don't know what is you message that you are trying to send to us, but good job so far. Keep it up :)
The 2nd one works well, since the spacing between the words are equally balanced. The kerning/tracking between the letters and words are balanced as well. Also, I think that you chose the right typefaces for this part of the project. You just need to watch the spaces in between the letters and words; some are just a bit too close to each other. The first image has potential. The third and fourth are so overbearing that they can be confusing. However, the concepts are there. ;D
ReplyDeleteThank you, and yes I will definitely work on the spacing of the letters!
ReplyDeleteGOOD JOB! The second one is good as Nil said. I think it is the best. I don't know what is you message that you are trying to send to us, but good job so far. Keep it up :)
ReplyDeleteI think these are looking good. I like the second one the best. my suggestion is to make the headline a little larger to fill the space.
ReplyDeleteI agree that the second , composition is a great composition....
ReplyDeleteI like the fourth composition better do i believe it has more potential as a composition its very dynamic, has interesting movement..
im no shure that the text area is working but the composition its self is great.