These rae both really good! I like the top one, the typeface is great and very appropriate. I think the use of paragraph is very nice and clean looking. The second one is a very good solution and it is really working. it is simple but very expressive. Great Job!
Good job. I mean comparing to the previous roughs, this is a huge improvement. The first design is balanced and the placement of the A ,in the word "WAR", gives the sense of a dome of a mosque. Over all, good work.
I love the typeface that you used for Libyas and T. It creates enough contrast in the comp to be eye catching and to illustrate that these is a very 'dirty'and negative issue.
These rae both really good! I like the top one, the typeface is great and very appropriate. I think the use of paragraph is very nice and clean looking. The second one is a very good solution and it is really working. it is simple but very expressive. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteGood job. I mean comparing to the previous roughs, this is a huge improvement. The first design is balanced and the placement of the A ,in the word "WAR", gives the sense of a dome of a mosque. Over all, good work.
ReplyDeleteI love the typeface that you used for Libyas and T. It creates enough contrast in the comp to be eye catching and to illustrate that these is a very 'dirty'and negative issue.
ReplyDeleteThank you guys for your feed back. I appreciate it. I worked on them a lot.
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